Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Between IN & OH

i raise an unholy finger
in the direction of you
and whisper gently
adieu, adieu, adieu

the ripping sound you hear?
oh, it's just my heart
my crazy lovelorn heart
being torn
apart

but at last your words
they speak your truth
at last your very words
carried the words

'I knew'

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Why relive in words such a painful place. Looking forward now will bring you hope. In living in this place of anger you are missing the opportunity to know the potentially lovely people around you, including yourself. I wish for you pleasant travels in safe and hopeful lands.

Anonymous said...

I think these are beautiful words and good to express anger. I love reading your poetry and look forward to more of it. Helene